You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mrs Zoe I am writing
this
letter to sincerely apologize for your complaint letter that I recently received about the
noise
from my flat.
To begin
with, I
throw
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threw
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a small party for my daughter
last
week and I invited some of my daughter's friends to join
this
party.
Although
I planned a simple party, the children wanted to play games after having meals at events and they wished to
say
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stay
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at midnight as the next day was the weekend. I highly apologise for my event that took till midnight and the
noise
from the children, who came to my daughter’s birthday dinner,
make
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made
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your children difficult to sleep tight and focus on doing their homework.
In addition
, I noticed that you were disappointed as you were unable to have a great time doing your daily things on that day. I will make sure not to make a
noise
that will disturb you and I will inform and get approval from building management to hold it in the public areas in the evening
instead
of making
noise
at night. Once again, my apology for any inconvenience and thanks a lot for your understanding. Yours Faithfully Sandar
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task response
Address the specific points in the prompt, such as explaining the reasons for the noise and describing the action you will take, in more detail.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved by structuring the letter more effectively.
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