You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mrs Zoe I am writing

this

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letter to sincerely apologize for your complaint letter that I recently received about the

noise

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from my flat.

To begin

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with, I

throw

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threw

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a small party for my daughter

last

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week and I invited some of my daughter's friends to join

this

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party.

Although

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I planned a simple party, the children wanted to play games after having meals at events and they wished to

say

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stay

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at midnight as the next day was the weekend. I highly apologise for my event that took till midnight and the

noise

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from the children, who came to my daughter’s birthday dinner,

make

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made

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your children difficult to sleep tight and focus on doing their homework.

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, I noticed that you were disappointed as you were unable to have a great time doing your daily things on that day. I will make sure not to make a

noise

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that will disturb you and I will inform and get approval from building management to hold it in the public areas in the evening

instead

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of making

noise

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at night. Once again, my apology for any inconvenience and thanks a lot for your understanding. Yours Faithfully Sandar

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task response

Address the specific points in the prompt, such as explaining the reasons for the noise and describing the action you will take, in more detail.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved by structuring the letter more effectively.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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