Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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I am a person who believes that if everyone in the
world
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unites once, we can make our planet habitable for many people once more. But
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will not be the case if groups of wealthy people or those who now hold power choose to disregard the problem and convince themselves that the
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has not changed. One person
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many sea turtles by not using a plastic straw for their whole life could not compare to the rich who cares
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enough
enought
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enough
about the
world
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and stop using private jets. A person who is not as accountable as the billionaire or the government would not be able to do anything about
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issue. We did not have a private plane to pollute the air, we did not own the
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industry, and we did not degrade the environment to the same level as they do. No matter how many eco-friendly products we use, the earth will continue to burn since the wealthy continue to pollute our atmosphere. The government's lack of concern for environmental issues will continue to degrade our lands, water, and air. Nowadays, it is all about power and money. It is very tragic that we will see the
world
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's gradual and aggressive demise, and the worst part is that we can do nothing about it because we lack the resources and influence to unite the globe and make it care more about the global warming crisis. I agree with Greta Thunberg that the most important aspect of
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issue is to
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governments and the wealthy. Because ultimately,
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world
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is
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theirs. And they are the
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I blame the most
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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