You are going to have a party. you would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . explain why you are having the party . describe your plans for the party . suggested how your friend can travel to the party and where he/she can stay

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Dear Anu, I hope you and your family are doing well! I am writing

this

letter to invite you to the birthday party on 22nd November 2022 at my home. My father turns 60 on 22nd November 2022 so I have decided to throw a party on his 60th birthday at my place to celebrate by inviting all my close friends and relatives.

Firstly

, We will start with the cake cutting

then

the people who are invited to the party will take pictures with my family. After that, I invited the best singer in town to sing the latest songs during the celebration.

In addition

, I have planned to present a small gift to all of them.

Finally

, I have arranged a dinner with both vegetarian and non-vegetarian dishes. I have paid one transport company to pick up and drop off the people commuting from a long distance so you don't need to worry about the travel.

Furthermore

, for accommodation, I have booked the rooms at Fortune hotel near Karama street for 3 days so you can stay at the hotel during the trip. I hope we will meet soon and awaiting your reply. With best wishes, Venkatesh Ravichandran

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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