Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
Nowadays, many
people
announce that music
is an important way of bringing different people
from different cultures and ages together. I completely agree with that statement and in this
article, I will discuss its pros and cons.
First
and foremost, music
can have a great impact on the human brain, because it can lead to an improvement in our mental activity and also
can escalate children's creativity. If children play music
, for instance
, piano, their cognitive abilities would climb and also
, If the older generation listens to soothing music
constantly, it would be great to reduce their stresses and anxieties. People
of different ages could benefit from music
, but sometimes music
can be harmful to kids and affects their education.
Secondly
, music
could remove boundaries between cultures, for instance
, international carnivals and festivals which are held annually. But sometimes global awards like Grammy,
can have a detrimental effect on international communication. But some types of Remove the comma
apply
music
like folk music
may help people
to enhance their knowledge of other nations and traditions, for example
, Asian music
mostly played with traditional musical instruments such
as balafon and djembe, but classic melodies played with piano and violin.
By way of conclusion, on the one hand, music
can reduce stress and also
alleviate pupils and old hard situations and both of them can enjoy and play music
together and with their relatives and beloved ones. On the other hand
, music
may help people
to bring back together with such
events like festivals and concerts which are held by different nations and renowned singers, because of the reasons which are written above, in addition
, music
can bring hearts together and help them to take time with each other.Submitted by melika7amouian9 on
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