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In the future, no body will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree to this opinion.

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The bar chart illustrates the information about how the public in one native spent their weekly salary between 1968 to 2018. From an overall perspective, it is evident that people spending on food is the highest cost In 1968 and leisure is the highest cost in 2018. Looking at the graph in more detail, we can see an apparent difference in food percentage between 1968 and 2018, which increased dramatically from 18% to 35%. Housing and Clothing both were 10% of weekly spending by the population, whereas rose up to 19% and 22% over a half-century.
On the other hand
, leisure had rapid growth during a span of 50 years, which was more than double the percentage in 2018. The proportion of weekly spending was the same included. Household goods, personal. goods, and transport at 8%, which had little change between 50 years.
However
, the less spending was on fuel and power, decreasing from 6% to 4%. In conclusion, the average most frequent expense is food in 1968 but changed to leisure in 2018.
On the contrary
, fuel and power are the less money spent by families.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital media
  • accessible
  • advancements
  • user-friendly
  • environmental impact
  • reducing paper consumption
  • digital reading devices
  • economic implications
  • monetization models
  • demographics
  • collectibility
  • ease of annotation
  • reduced screen time
  • negative impacts
  • literacy
  • reading habits
  • promoting access
  • cultural significance
  • historical significance
  • transition
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