Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Disposing of debris has become a big problem for society. Because there is no proper measure to discharge the
waste
. In this
essay, I will explain the reasons for the increasing amount of garbage and possible solutions that can be done by the government to reduce waste
accumulation.
To begin
with, undeniably, the main reason for a significant amount of debris accumulation is population. In other words
, usage and wasting are directly proportional to the population. In addition
, another major reason is that there is no good rule for disposing of waste
to maintain the balance in the ecosystem. For example
, people are wasting rubbish in the sea or on the road recklessly in almost all countries instead
of recycling or putting them in a bin. As a result
of wasting recklessly, rubbish has accumulated and it becomes a huge problem for the environment.
However
, a good solution is that authorities should regulate in order to control this
high volume of garbage collection. Firstly
, the government should put a ban on products which are not eco-friendly like plastic cups or straws as those products are indissoluble waste
that can pollute the earth. Secondly
, the government should enlighten the public on the importance of recycling and how to waste
debris carefully in the dustbins which are categorized according to
the sorts of trash. Moreover
, if people did not follow the rule
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rules
or
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For instance
, in Singapore, no one can not
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their litter in a determinate dustbin, they will get a fine of $500.
To sum up
, although
discharging more and more waste
is because of both increasing populations and lack of discipline among the public, governments can undertake to set a proper ban to reduce the amount of producing
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