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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In today’s world, people are using technological
devices
 and online sources like the internet more and more every day. It is predicted that we will use these to read our news and
books
, and printed versions will be ancient in the
future
. It is agreed that we will be depending on technology and its online features in the
future
, mainly because of our lifestyle choices and environmental issues. In
this
 era, being able to accomplish tasks online has a major part in our lives and regarding
to
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technological development, it is likely to increase in the
next
 100 years. One may find
extremely
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 easy to read
books
 and news online, because they wouldn’t need to carry their belongings wherever they go, except
one
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 technological gadget.
Devices
 like Kindle are excellent examples
for
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this
,
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 because they provide
an
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easy access to readable items only with a hand gesture.
Also
, it is clear that
books
 are becoming more expensive day by day and it may be hard for some people to buy
books
, even newspapers regularly. Online shopping can offer a monthly subscription
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 so that one can use reading apps or
devices
 whenever they want. Printing
books
 may create problems regarding
to
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environment and climate change too. Because of the world’s overpopulation, there is a need for more production
in
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books
 and
this
 means a dramatic increase in cutting down trees.
Also
, when a book is printed, a need for distribution occurs too.
This
 is highly costly and dangerous for
environment
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 because high amounts of fuel
is
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 needed in order to provide transportation. Providing
this
 fuel means that there will be
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 of natural resources. In conclusion, online
devices
 are becoming extremely popular these days. It is highly possible that we will be reading our
books
 and news online in the
future
,
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 because it is easier to do so and it
also
 has environmental benefits. In my opinion, these are the two main reasons why printed
books
 and newspapers will be ancient in the
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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