You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: ● apology to your friend ● explain why you couldn’t attend the party ● say what steps you will take to avoid in future.

Dear Kigo, Hi there, how have you been? I hope you're doing well. I was overjoyed when I got your email and the photos we took
last
year, which bring back many memories. I miss you so much. Thank you for all of that. I have to say sorry for your invitation because I can't go to your home for your anniversary. I know you've made great preparations for that, but I have to tour the country with my band during that time. I'm very sorry for that because I can't change the schedule. You know I just released a new album
last
month, and the company has placed the Al-show for our band. We had lots of work to do even though I felt so tired. But I have good news to tell you: we will perform in your city. I sent you two tickets, and I will sing for you at that time. Hope everything will go more smoothly, and say sorry to you again, my best friend. Take care, Lei
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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