Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, some governments feel that their main vision is the economic enhancement of the

country

.

However

, I strongly agree with those who believe that the governments should be focused on other

sectors

such

as

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health

, and

Education

. On the one hand, those who support

the

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financial improvement say that the progress of the

economy

plays an important role in individuals' life that could be beneficial for them in several ways. If a

country

concentrates properly to thrive

the

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financial

sectors

, they develop

infrasturctues

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infrastructures

infrastructure

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throughout

through

thought

throught

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throughout

the

country

to enrich the road networks, and they could be able to receive

the

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foreign investments.

For Example

, a report has been published in the daily newspaper a couple of months ago that China has been investing

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those countries which are progressing steadily in the economic arenas in the

last

ten years.

Furthermore

, the living standards of a nation

increases

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dramatically when the governments focus on the enhancement of

economy

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the economy

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.

Consequently

, the rate of

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poverty could be declined day by day.

On the other hand

, in my opinion, the progress of

education

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and

health

sectors

ensure

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the fundamental rights of the citizens

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and make them independent from all perspectives. A quality

education

system might be provided

an

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educated nation, and it brings overseas’ people to study in a

country

which

enhance

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the

economy

.

For instance

, recently a study has shown that international students have contributed a huge amount of money

into

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the United Kingdom’s

economy

by paying their

tuitions

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in the year 2020, while other

sectors

had

least

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contribution

for

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epidemics of Covid-19.

In addition

, by improving

health

industries, the

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government

governments

goverments

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government

can make strong the

economy

eloquently.

Therefore

, people will not be visited other countries for better treatment, and they will be spent the money in their home

country

which they budgeted for abroad. In Conclusion,

although

economic progress has many advantages undoubtedly,

however

, I firmly believe that the

health

and

education

sectors

should be prioritized more than others.