RESEARCH INDICATES THAT THE CHARACTERISTICS WE ARE BORN WITH HAVE MUCH MORE INFLUENCE ON OUR PERSONALITY AND DEVELOPMENT THAN ANY EXPERIENCE WE MAY HAVE IN OUR LIFE. WHICH DO YOU CONSIDER TO BE THE MAJOR INFLUENCE?
It is true that everyone has personal nature and talent, as it is their ancestors.
However
, from different, experiences people learn a number of lessons about how to treat others and how we have to react to certain things.
In this
contemporary era, a character is a key to earning money and respect. Also
, a good and naive character or nature is always considered best, in terms of making friends and developing better relations with others. In addition
, some people have personal talent as motivational speakers, which influences youngsters and children such
as teachers and politicians. Whereas, politicians such
as Sardar Patel, Jawaharlal Nehru and Gandhiji derive Indians in a good manner and improved their point of view about the nation.
On the other hand
, experience is a crucial part of the inhabitant's routine as well as longevity life. In addition
, from bad experiences, people can learn about how to tackle critical situations. To illustrate this
, recently from India, mission mars,
was announced by an Indian scientific team, because of some errors rocket crashed and dropped down 8000 meters Remove the comma
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incident Indian scientists solved the different errors, which occurred inside the engine and it will be beneficial to get a higher success rate for missions to mars in future.
In a nutshell, I personally believe that personality matters the most to make a strong bond with everyone, but somewhere experience is also
an important phase for individuals to remember their problems.Submitted by rahulgpatel19 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite