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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative? Why?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the company manager. In the letter, you should: – give the details of your order. – explain why you need the book urgently. – suggest a solution for the situation.

Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take?