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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative? Why?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

Eco-tourism usually involves people visiting remote areas. Some poeple think this will have a negative impact on local cultures and communities. What are they? how can they be overcome?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples agree = main reason, some wrong disagree = environment, old