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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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In our up-to-date life, technology is developing day by day and a lot of individuals utelize
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 to make some projects at house and at office or company to the
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 10 years, whether using
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 to do some work is a positive or a negative trend among
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. From my point of view, utelize
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 is a positive development. There are no doubt that to do some work with the help of
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 have coused more merits than cons. For one thing, it does not require extra action. More preciesely, a numerous people complain that from many works dou to they are tired,
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,
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 technolgy is very beneficial
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 types of individuals. Take as an example: according to technologist point that 80 per cent of people who purchase their products are
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 who are busy and don't have time to do some things. For another,
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 do many jobs in the home and office better than
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 because individuals are not able to some hard works.
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: some of the heavy loads required for the construction of houses can be performed better by machines than by
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.
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 to that, in terms of mental work, computers and
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 are much stronger than some people. To be sure, one of the biggest negative aspects of doing some works via
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 which it is maybe dangerous because electrical equipment is not always safe.
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, according to statistics, many accidents in the world are caused by
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. In final analysis, dispite the fact that it is good that
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 help in doing tasks, because it does not take too much effort and time.
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