In many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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behaviours and
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attitude
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schools with other
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partners
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teachers is
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matter which
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schools
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authorities.
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determine
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this
kind of acting from pupils. regardless some minority of students who have spiritual problems and they Should See
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therapist
so they can work on their action, I personally believe that the majority of
children
who cause difficulties in schools are coming from families who
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not
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provide safe and reliable
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environment
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kids
.
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understanding is much more than
parents
imagine, they realize every
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consequently
if they feel can not share their
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with
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being unpleasant in
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society
. Undoubtedly, different family background,
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child breeding,
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introduce
completely varies
kids
to Community which behave by their own moral rules,
this
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destructive
attitude, in that
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we should find
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solution. Supportive
parents
who
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the
kids
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he/she is
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loveable
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and wanted
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the key in
this
matter.
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teacher's duty as well,
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with their class about their feeling. In conclusion,
children
are more
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understandable
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it seems,
parents
and school
manager
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managers
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, have to make
children
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to communicate with them not just use punishment method which
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of
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more damage
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their Soul.
Kids
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angel
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angels
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but sometimes
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horrible
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convert them to evil. We all should be more careful
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how treat them
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