In many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
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requires
parents
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to schools
schools
authorities. Change the noun form
school
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determine
cause
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causes
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have
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for their Correct your spelling
environment
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children's
parents
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thoughts
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society
vary
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and vary
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completely varies Correct your spelling
introduce
kids
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is acceptable until they do not Show
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show
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strength
also
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destructive
case
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kids
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think
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talk
with their class about their feeling. In conclusion, Fix the infinitive
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children
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parents
and school manager
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managers
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apply
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angels
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite