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Many educators believe that international exchange trips are beneficial for students. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give you opinion and include any relevent example

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There are teachers who believe that it is irrefutable to decline the importance of international
exchange
 tours for children's development. I completely agree with
this
 statement and provide reasons in the essay. There are several reasons behind the success of international
exchange
trips
 for pupils.
To begin
 with, these
trips
 build self-confidence in the
students
. As they are travelling from one
country
 to another
country
,
students
 understand various cultures and historical places. For better understanding, they have to communicate with native people in their regional language which boosts their self-confidence.
Furthermore
, these programs are acquainting learners know about an educational system of a new
country
.
For example
, In India, the importance of theoretical knowledge is more than practical knowledge, so
students
 can learn about new ways of understanding a subject when they are on
trips
.
Moreover
, these tours can bring out the best in
students
 as they are living far from their houses and surviving by themselves. These situations allow learners to think out of the box and improve their creativity. Here I want to talk about my friend who was a part of these
trips
 during his school time, his name is Ishan Soni, and he went to brazil for 6 months in an
exchange
 program where he had to stay with 2 different families. He learnt about the culture, food habits, historical places, and economic and educational system of that
country
.
This
 gave him good exposure compared with
students
 who were not part of these
trips
. The only disadvantage which I believe is,
students
 can lose their focus on academic subjects and could score less on the exams.
However
, with better time management they can score good marks. In conclusion, I opine that these
exchange
 programmes are betterment for the wholistic development of a student and ,
hence
 schools and parents should motivate them to take active participation in these events.
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