in some countries young people are encourage to work or ttavel for a year between finishing high scooland starting universty studies. Describe advantages and disadvantages.

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break

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between high school and

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at

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least one year while

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they would have enough time for working and travelling. In

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regard, there are benefits and disadvantages which are not deniable. Young

people

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have

chance

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to promote their experience in

field

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the field

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of

working

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because finding occupy will be

accured

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accrued

acquired

sooner than

other

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others

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of their

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their

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same

ages

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.

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being the case,

people

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can clear their path career and for achieving to best target climb the ladder career. In the short run, motivation as a key role can improve the level of position. So high wages

is

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expected. In doing so, individuals create

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independent

independed

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independent

characters who can make better decisions lonely without helping their parents. Carrying out education and entrance to

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will be performance maturity. Supplementary to

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, students spend approximately 12 years

for

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academic courses which can remain

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on

people

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mental

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so travelling

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some tranquil.

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, relationships with other

people

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would be increased and young

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can have

close

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connection

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connections

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with their relatives.

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travelling is

necessity

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and

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relationships and self-

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imposed

cost

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costs

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cannot be ignored. It is true that skills in myriad

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fields

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as wide social connection, fluently speaking in front of audience and writing resume for finding

job

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a job

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will be bosted.

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at the

university

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connection with tutors is developed. on a more negative note, after

graduated

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education recipients have to

great

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deal of

money

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for travelling. Because often they depend on their parents and receive pocket

money

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which is make

aliving

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a living

living

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money

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destroys the behaviour of young

people

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and guides them to the consumption of drugs and addiction.

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measure, sometimes grantee not accepted at

university

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. In conclusion, breaking high school and

university

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can be beneficial for spending convenient education at

university

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with two factors

of

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travelling and working.

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, disadvantages like not having

money

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result in losing travel and

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not being accepted at

university

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.