in some countries young people are encourage to work or ttavel for a year between finishing high scooland starting universty studies. Describe advantages and disadvantages.

In several ,countries adolescents would be motivated to have
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between high school and
university
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least one year while
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they would have enough time for working and travelling. In
this
regard, there are benefits and disadvantages which are not deniable. Young
people
have
chance
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to promote their experience in
field
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of
working
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because finding occupy will be
accured
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accrued
acquired
sooner than
other
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others
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their
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same
ages
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.
This
being the case,
people
can clear their path career and for achieving to best target climb the ladder career. In the short run, motivation as a key role can improve the level of position. So high wages
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expected. In doing so, individuals create
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independent
independed
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independent
characters who can make better decisions lonely without helping their parents. Carrying out education and entrance to
university
will be performance maturity. Supplementary to
this
, students spend approximately 12 years
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academic courses which can remain
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on
people
's
mental
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so travelling
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some tranquil.
Therefore
, relationships with other
people
would be increased and young
people
can have
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connection
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connections
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with their relatives.
Although
travelling is
necessity
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and
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relationships and self-
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imposed
cost
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cannot be ignored. It is true that skills in myriad
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such
as wide social connection, fluently speaking in front of audience and writing resume for finding
job
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will be bosted.
Finally
at the
university
connection with tutors is developed. on a more negative note, after
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education recipients have to
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deal of
money
for travelling. Because often they depend on their parents and receive pocket
money
which is make
aliving
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a living
living
. Parents think much
money
destroys the behaviour of young
people
and guides them to the consumption of drugs and addiction.
This
measure, sometimes grantee not accepted at
university
. In conclusion, breaking high school and
university
can be beneficial for spending convenient education at
university
with two factors
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travelling and working.
On the other hand
, disadvantages like not having
money
result in losing travel and
finally
not being accepted at
university
.
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