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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction
In recent years, environmental problems have increased frequently for decades.
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 tendency may result in several issues as the
government
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 is unprohibited to address these causes. I strongly agree with the statement and the essay will expound on my views.
Body paragraph 1
To commence with, there are two major reasons causing environmental problems if the public authorities do not take action to forbid deforestation.
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, a lot of offenders have made deforestation on the planet for many years in order to facilitate the building of skyscrapers for residents.
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, some Asian cities
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 as Shanghai, Beijing, Hong Kong etc. There have been many apartments that used forest natural materials for construction.
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, so many trees have been cut down by the labourers due to building a huge amount of liveable houses causing the environmental problem.
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, cities
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 as these cities have had a large amount of garbage sent off to landfills, which could lead to air pollution.
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
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, there are some nations that have had to regulate ecocide laws banning the offenders from the
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such
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 as the British
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.
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, the Uk bureaucracy has set up ecocide laws to proscribe some criminals to destroy the forests.
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, they did not inhibit the criminals from cutting down or burning off the trees. That's why
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 issue would be a server case.
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, the
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 must take the right role to measure them.
Conclusion
In a nutshell, following the statements above, environmental problems have increased frequently for decades because the
government
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 is not prohibited to address these causes.
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, the
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 and the bureaucracies should take the right roles to solve them.

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