Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Topic Vocabulary:

ecosystem
extinction
biodiversity
deforestation
urbanization
contamination
overexploitation
global warming
climate change
non-native
safeguard
eco-friendly
sustainable
legislation
rehabilitation
endangered species
conservation
environmental impact
sustainability
biodiversity loss
ecological balance
sanctuary
environmental degradation
policy implementation
wildlife protection
ecotourism
biodiversity conservation
ecological footprint
sustainable development
pollinator decline

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