You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should : apologize for it tell how it got damaged say how you are going to fix the issue.
Dear Anu,
I am writing
this
letter to apologize for the damage caused to the item received from you last
week. Sorry, It is taken so long to inform you because I was feeling so guilty for damaging the item. I am aware, it is an important one
for you as It was a gift from your wife.
Last
week I had a match in the Chinnaswamy stadium against Chennai Super Kings team so I decided to use your bat
since it was knocked properly and light weighted one
. When I was facing the pace bowler in the 19th over, I tried to play the straight drive shot but unfortunately, the ball was hit on the edge of the bat
because I played the shot very late. Otherwise
, the bat
wouldn't got damaged if I played the shot perfectly.
I know a couple of cricket shops where they can repair the damaged bats. I visited one
of the shops near Karama street, the shop owner promised me that It can be repaired in a couple of days and it will look like a new one
after the service. Moreover
, they put the protector on the damaged part so it won't break again.
I hope you will accept my apologies and I will hand over the bat
to you soon.
With best regards,
Venkatesh RavichandranSubmitted by crvenkatesh1904 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite