More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In
the
recent modern society, the number of Correct article usage
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people
who are attracted to famous brands
has been increasing and this
trend spreads across various merchandises
including clothes and automobiles. Fix the agreement mistake
merchandise
Such
global brands
like Louis Vuitton and Gucci can sell their products with high premiums whereas other less known
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less-known
makers
are forced to lower prices to penetrate among consumers. I believe this
phenomenon has many drawbacks such
as creating social
divide between the wealthy and the poor.
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a social
first
demerit of too much popularity of well known
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well-known
brands
is its negative impact
to
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on
less known
product Add a hyphen
less-known
makers
. It is true that high brand
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brands
high
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high-quality
quality
materials with unique designs, however
often times other less unknown Add a comma
,however
makers
' merchandises have similar or equal quality
as those of high-end brands
. Regardless, while those brand
bags and dresses sell at astonishing
high prices, good Change the adjective
astonishingly
quality
unknown brands
should lower their prices to survive. For example
, in centre
of Tokyo, many foreign visitors, mainly from China and other Asian countries are often lining up to purchase Prada wallets, Vuitton bags, and Gucci coats but they have no interest in traditional Correct article usage
the centre
high
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high-quality
quality
Japanese makers
. As such
, attaching too much importance to well-known brands
will have negative
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a negative
impact
to
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on
makers
.
The second
negative impact
is its creation of social
divide, namely Correct article usage
a social
the
rich and the less wealthy. Change preposition
between the
Brand
goods became so expensive so
that only a few groups of very wealthy Correct word choice
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people
can afford them and the products are becoming as
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people
wearing Italian and French astonishingly expensive shirts and pants, driving
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and driving
car
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cars
they
are living in Japan. Correct word choice
if they
On the other hand
, many young people
cannot buy those high-end products and wearing
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wear
uniqlo
t-shirts, walking streets filled with Chinese Change the capitalization
Uniqlo
people
making queues in front of the brand
shops. As a consequence, too much focus on brands
may create social confrontations.
In conclusion, although
a good brand
tend
to be a promise Change the verb form
tends
for
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of
quality
and security, putting too much importance to
it may have Change preposition
on
negative
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a negative
impact
to
less known good Change preposition
on
quality
national makers
. In addition
, there is a risk that it may cause social divide Correct your spelling
between
betweent
groups with different financial conditions.Correct your spelling
between
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