The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.
Brazil is the host of the World Cup which is one of the biggest international sports events. It can not be denied that it brings the advantages for health improvement and good habits but it
also
causes a lot of players jury during the practice process and official match.
On the one hand, football is excellent for health improvement and building good habits because it is a ponderous sport, it required players to be active for a long time. In other words
, that can help them learn how to arrange their schedule, and control their diet to maintain a good body figure with a lot of benefits. In addition
, the sport could give a clearer vision of how to work as a team in which everyone must have good co-operation to bring back victory. For example
, Arsenal is a team that has won so many games by playing well with each other.
On the other hand
, injury can be a disadvantage for any players who join professionally. If it is light, it will only be an external wound, severe might lead to ligament rupture. To illustrate, footballers such
as Timo Werner or Reece James had to stop their careers. Moreover
, violence or hatred may arise between viewers of two opposing teams.
In conclusion, it could be terrifying by the potential risk, and yet can still bring excitement and good benefits along.Submitted by workwithmanh1989 on
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