The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.

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Brazil is the host of the World Cup which is one of the biggest international sports events. It can not be denied that it brings the advantages for health improvement and good habits but it

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causes a lot of players jury during the practice process and official match. On the one hand, football is excellent for health improvement and building good habits because it is a ponderous sport, it required players to be active for a long time.

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, that can help them learn how to arrange their schedule, and control their diet to maintain a good body figure with a lot of benefits.

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, the sport could give a clearer vision of how to work as a team in which everyone must have good co-operation to bring back victory.

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, Arsenal is a team that has won so many games by playing well with each other.

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, injury can be a disadvantage for any players who join professionally. If it is light, it will only be an external wound, severe might lead to ligament rupture. To illustrate, footballers

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as Timo Werner or Reece James had to stop their careers.

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, violence or hatred may arise between viewers of two opposing teams. In conclusion, it could be terrifying by the potential risk, and yet can still bring excitement and good benefits along.

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The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.

Your opinion

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.

9. People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than those who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your work place tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this ?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?