The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.

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Brazil is the host of the World Cup which is one of the biggest international sports events. It can not be denied that it brings the advantages for health improvement and good habits but it

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causes a lot of players jury during the practice process and official match. On the one hand, football is excellent for health improvement and building good habits because it is a ponderous sport, it required players to be active for a long time.

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, that can help them learn how to arrange their schedule, and control their diet to maintain a good body figure with a lot of benefits.

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, the sport could give a clearer vision of how to work as a team in which everyone must have good co-operation to bring back victory.

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, Arsenal is a team that has won so many games by playing well with each other.

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, injury can be a disadvantage for any players who join professionally. If it is light, it will only be an external wound, severe might lead to ligament rupture. To illustrate, footballers

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as Timo Werner or Reece James had to stop their careers.

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, violence or hatred may arise between viewers of two opposing teams. In conclusion, it could be terrifying by the potential risk, and yet can still bring excitement and good benefits along.

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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The Football World Cup is taking place in Brazil now. Write a composition of no more than 250 words to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of football.

Your opinion

Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening? do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

People who damage public property, such as buildings or statues should be required to do community service (such as cleaning parks) as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment (such as paying a fine or going to prison). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?