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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hair styles. In your opinion what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing.

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Recently,
people
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 have been following the latest fashion and
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hairstyles
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hair styles
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hairstyles
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 in
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several countries. I strongly believe that social
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 is the primary effect of
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 trend, and it causes harmful consequences.
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 commence with, the prominent reason why thousands of
people
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 want to follow these trends is
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 of social
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in
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 our
lives
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. Every single day, users of social
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 platforms are exposed to influencers’
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 which they are dreaming
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, they want to reflect something in their
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. To illustrate, Neymar
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 is one of the most famous football players in the world dyed his
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 yellow and posted
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it in
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in
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 Instagram.
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, their fans started to dye their
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 yellow. In short, they cannot have a
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 like Neymar, so they mirror his
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hairstyle
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hair style
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hairstyle
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 at least.
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 as mental disorders.
People
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 strive to copy the
influencers
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influencer's
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life
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 not because of the
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bitterness
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 of their's fashion or styles but because of
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having a cool
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 like them. Yet,
people
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 don’t have
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a monetary
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 source to afford
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 a
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.
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, they start to think why I am not able to live in
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 same way.
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 has led to
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 unhappiness since they don’t know that these
lives
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 are not real. Influencers just put
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photos which they are in the best moments of their
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.
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, users consider they always like that, leading to some problems for users’ mental health. In conclusion,
people
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 integrate some trends
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 as fashion and
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hairstyle
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hair style
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hairstyle
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in
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into
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 their
life
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. Social
media
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 has numerous effects on
people
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.
Hence
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, the primary influencer of
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 trend is social
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.
This
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 can lead to dangerous outcomes as fans try to resemble influencers but they don’t have
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finance for
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.
As a result
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 of
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,some mental disorders arise because of feeling insufficientness
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