All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

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It is considered by some parents that children have to get
skills
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in school, while others think that education should be concentrated on subjects. In my opinion, teaching some additional
skills
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will help students in the
future
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essay will discuss both viewpoints. On the one hand, there is an option that school can give to children not only
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but
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help to train some additional
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,
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as cooking, oratory, etc., which could help them in the
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, individuals who have life
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will be easier to adapt
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adult life, and received knowledge,
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as oratory, could give strong points to the candidate
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university
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interview. It is difficult to argue against
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view as long as
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knowledge prepares teenagers for the best opportunities and it broadens their
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, the priority of universities in England is to get the best students, and competition is very high, because they want to get not only well-educated for the academic side, but
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well-prepared with
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because universities
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want to know which bonuses candidates can bring to
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life.
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, many parents believe that
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concentration on a subject is better for
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because academic knowledge will help to get the best work opportunities. Indeed, some professions require a strong academic base,
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as medicine, and companies require job seekers to have a degree to be a part of their organization.
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may be true of some particular work, and some professions require people to study a subject deeply, but there are many cases when candidates move forward into
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career steps without specialized training. To illustrate, many businessmen,
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as Steve Jobs, did not get a
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degree
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but could
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his
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own company by possessing the necessary
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for a successful businessman. To conclude,
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it is still believed by many parents that schools should train children in some
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,
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advocate the concentration on
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will help students in the
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. In my opinion,
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schools
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have to study
skills
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, because getting
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additional
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will help young people get more opportunities
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University
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