In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.

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I believe that studying at school is a better way to study than at home. I feel

this

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way for two reasons which I explore in the following essay.

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of all, School is a place where we can see other people and learn new things from them.

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, my friend is a half-Thai-French girl. She can speak French just like a native speaker because she always talks to her father at home. I, passionately in love with learning a new language, enjoy talking to her and now can speak a little bit of French.

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, If I try to learn to speak French at home by using youtube or google, it’s just like one-way communication which it’s not a proper way to learn and I wouldn’t know the word that they actually use in their daily life.

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, we have a teacher who can answer the questions more clearly than computers or television do. I used to study maths through online courses and I had got so many questions. Unfortunately, the teacher was on TV and I could not ask anything from her and I had to understand what the lesson was about by myself.

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, I took the exam and fail. So learning through a computer or TV doesn’t work at all. In conclusion, studying at a traditional school has more advantages

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as getting new things from real people and

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, asking questions of teachers at any time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

245 words

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In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.

Fully explain your ideas

Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledges and experiences.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?

Some people think newspapers could be the best method for reading the news. Does this opinion have advantages that outweigh the disadvantages?