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In some cultures, childeren are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving childeren this message?

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Trying hard and achieving every goal you set is a part of some nation's education for
children
.
This
 method has positive and negative sides as teaches to young generation to do their best but if they do not achieve their wants, even though by hardworking it makes them depressed. It is so crucial for
children
 to understand the importance of powerful work. Being in a position or being in some situation is not easy and people should teach their
children
 to focus on their
goals
 and not think about other things. In ,addition
this
 matter teaches
children
 that it is good to have your own targets and imagine, design and work for the future ways.
This
 statement makes the
children
 prepare for obstacles in the future and not be disappointed by problems.
Besides
 the advantages,
this
 all-time successful vision leads to serious mental problems or disorders in the child.
Firstly
 they always feel pressure and they do not be happy and satisfied on any occasion because they have
goals
 ahead and should not waste their time on leisure activities and things like that.
Also
 if they try hard and do not achieve their
goals
 they will be upset and depressed and no one could not be 100% ensure about achieving their
goals
. If these people complete their tasks they will interface with new ones and at all times they struggle with their
goals
. In conclusion, being ideal in
this
 matter has specific advantages and disadvantages.
Children
 will be ready for their way but they always carrying worrying about themself.
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