You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • describe the vacation spot you have chosen • explain how you plan to spend your time there • invite your friend to join you on your vacation Begin your letter as follows: Dear….

#vacation #friend #spot #plan #time #dear…

Dear Hanna, How are you doing? I haven’t seen you for a while since the

last

picnic. I’m writing

this

letter to tell you that I

finally

can have a rest so I decided to go on vacation to Israel.

To begin

with, I chose Tel Aviv as the city where I want to stay. There is a really nice mini-hotel surrounded by shops and restaurants.

Besides

this

place is not so far from the coastline which looks amazing if you search its’ pictures online.

Second

, I don’t think that I will spend the whole time lying on the beach. I want to visit Jerusalem and

also

I’ve already ordered a trip to the Dead Sea. There are a lot of different spa programmes on the Dead Sea so I am going to book one for myself. I would really appreciate it if you could visit Israel with me. Here are the dates: 20th of September – 27th of September. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Andrew

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8 paragraphs

171 words

9.00

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Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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