Children nowadays watch significantly more television than those in the past, which reduces their activities levels accordingly. Why is this case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?
In
this
contemporary epoch, the influence of television programs on offspring has become a controversial argument. Whilst the main factor that has encouraged this
trend is the international marketing campaigns, I emphasize that schools' intrusion is the panacea for this
. In this
essay, the main reason behind this
trend, along with possible solutions will be further
elaborated.
To embark on, although
some publicity campaigns have a malicious effect on teenagers' activities, they are targetting mainly adolescents. This
means that when international companies use children's favourite cartoon characters, infants will crave these snacks and take excessive bites. An eminent example of this
is the Nutella advert which produce
an illusive image concerning its ingredients as being healthy Change the verb form
produces
although
it is loaded with palm oils and refined sugars. Therefore
, what can be said is that universal marketing companies play a salient role in leading a sedentary lifestyle.
Furthermore
, schools should intervene by promoting sports through extra-curricular activities. In other words
, if young academics are offered a variety of sports competitions, they will be encouraged to practice more. This
can be witnessed by international schools in Egypt which provide extra classes for jumping, running and football. Accordingly
, in a final analysis, the rule of educational institutions in raising teenagers' awareness about the importance of active life cannot be neglected.
In conclusion, after this
essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only do advertisements compel offspring to spend more time at home, but also
they hinder them from spending ample time Correct your spelling
exercising
excercising
. Eventually, I am a staunch believer that without educational institutions, children could not have been active.Correct your spelling
exercising
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