With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers,fewer people are writing letters,some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
due to
the improvement in technology, people can write things by using technological devices such
as computers and cell phones. Thus
, it is often argued that the skill of writing letters on paper
traditionally is going to disappear eventually. I completely disagree with this
point and I will explain the reasons in the following essay.
Although
,
more and more people tend to communicate with friends and colleagues with technological devices, it is my opinion that the traditional skills of writing still stand a significant role. The reason is that when it comes to formal situations and the purpose of keeping important evidence, writing or recording on Remove the comma
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paper
is more reliable and can be taken as strong evidence. For example
, corporations are more likely to sign the contrasts by using the traditional ways, namely keeping paper
documents. Because
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This
this
way can let the companies feel more safety
and have more insurance.
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safe
Moreover
, writing on paper
always represents the writers' strong feelings and love for the receivers. Thus
, people like to share their feelings by writing them down on cards or paper
letters, especially on special days. That is
to ,say that handwriting has special meanings among humans and will still be used in the future.
In conclusion, using
of mobile phones and computers to communicate will keep growing, Wrong verb form
the use
whereas
in my view the importance of writing by hand will not be changed
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are appropriate for the task and the tone of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear structure that presents one idea per paragraph to enhance coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
Support the arguments with more specific examples and explanations to fully address the task question.
task achievement
Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter, balancing formality with personal expression.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.