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Summer people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life other breeds that we call me of the region has the greatest and had to discuss about the use and give your opinion

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A fair amount of the public believes that climate change affects
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the
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life
 of
people
 whereas others say that the economic condition of the nation has more effect. now ,
this
 essay will hash out both viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs before reaching any conclusion. one of the main reasons is that global warming is increasing at an alarming rate as environmental pollution is escalating .when human beings do various activities namely deforestation,industrialisation and burning of fossil fuels,they release numerous greenhouse gases
such
 as carbon dioxide, methane ,sulphur dioxide and nitrogen oxide .through
this
, the temperature of the earth is rising.
consequently
 ,the pattern of occurrence of rainfall will change and
also
 different disasters like drought and floods will upsurge.along with
this
 , the migration of
people
 will increase due to more crop failures.
for instance
,meteorologist witness delays in Southwest rainfall in the case of India . discussing the latter viewpoint,health, as well as education, plays a vital role in all countries of the world .owing to
this
, these are the basic necessities of
life
 .there are some parts of the world like South Africa and Iran where
people
 struggle a lot because these economies lack hospital and school. if proper education and health facilities are provided to the public, the literacy rate will grow up and the death rate will decline.
as a result
 ,the image of the nation will improve in the eyes of other countries and simultaneously the living standard of
people
 will improve and they will lead a happy
life
. to conclude ,
although
 climate change has an adverse effect on
people
's way of
life
 ,I firmly believe that economic conditions have a much greater role to play which cannot be ignored.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate
  • geographical location
  • region
  • culture
  • traditions
  • economy
  • way of life
  • influence
  • impact
  • factors
  • choices
  • preferences
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