Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people tend to think that having a

car

brings more benefits. In modern society, the

car

is a secondary need because it is one of the efficient ways to travel within the city. I totally agree with the statement that a

car

is what we need currently.

Accordingly

,

this

essay will explain the advantages of private cars for people.

First

of all, in our community, taking public transportation is easier

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time

.

Therefore

, there are so many public transports

such

as train or bus which requires great service and cheap fares. But sometimes if we commute by public transportation, we might need extra physical activities because it is always crowded in the morning and evening when everyone goes back home after work. So, it is more effective to take a private

car

to avoid the rush hour.

Secondly

, going to another city by private

car

is saving more

time

. In

this

modern world, there are so many cities’ highways as a shortcut to a place.

For instance

, when we go to Bandung, it takes only 3 hours by the Padalarang highway. ,

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we could spend extra

time

with family and could go to other various tourist objects by

car

.

Thirdly

, cars provide modern technology

such

as self-driving.

Moreover

, it only needs electricity to run the

car

to save our earth from global climate change.

For example

, Tesla and

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produce their electric

car

and it shows high demand in our societies. In conclusion, there is a plethora of private

car

as

car

nowadays is increasing safety technology and saving our

time

efficiently.