IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, the demand towards physical newspapers or
books
Use synonyms
 will be in decline as electronic ones will be accessed at no cost. I partially agree, in
people
Use synonyms
 will choose online over physical.
However
Linking Words
, it is impossible for e-
books
Use synonyms
 to be totally free.
To begin
Linking Words
 with, online
books
Use synonyms
 are popular due to the advance in technology. Today, there is even a specific device to read e-
books
Use synonyms
 named Kindle
Book
Use synonyms
.
People
Use synonyms
 can read more than a
book
Use synonyms
 on their own devices. Not to forget to mention the variety of
books
Use synonyms
 that could be easily found on some platforms,
such
Linking Words
 as Google
Books
Use synonyms
 and Apple
Books
Use synonyms
. Benefiting from its convenience, it can improve the literacy of the
people
Use synonyms
. As someone who used to be forced to read, ebooks make me spend more time reading without worrying about the availability of the
book
Use synonyms
 or the cost of it.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the cost of ebooks is more affordable than the physical ones, with some promotions being offered.
For instance
Linking Words
, ebooks’ bundling package for the same price as getting only one physical
book
Use synonyms
. There is even an e-
book
Use synonyms
 store that charges only $10,00 to get all of their fiction
books
Use synonyms
. It is likely because less money is used for
book
Use synonyms
 production.
However
Linking Words
, the writers of the
books
Use synonyms
 still get the royalty from the publisher.
Thus
Linking Words
, it will be difficult to access all of the online
books
Use synonyms
 without even paying. To conclude,
people
Use synonyms
 will choose online
books
Use synonyms
 or newspapers for their accessibility.
However
Linking Words
, to read those, they still need to pay some money as a way to support the authors.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: