You are living in a city in a foreign country and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit your for several days.

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Dear Dian I am glad

heard

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about your visit to America

week for just relax and travel. I cannot express my happiness

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words.

First

of all, I can and should say that

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we are going to meet after

1years

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and I hope you have been doing great all

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time. I am writing to ask you a big favour and do not forget about it. I hope and I need my special things from my home. I would be

blessfully

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happy if you could come and bring them along with you. The

first

thing is my essential book about being

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successful

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businessman. It was given

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by my best friend. It is absolutely necessary to me for my life.

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, I want to eat

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was prepared by my mother. Because they are really yummy. I hope it is not difficult and you will cause

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your

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. Do not worry, call me and send your location when you visit

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America. I try to pick up you from the airport. I am not waiting much time. Yours sincerely, Rein

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You are living in a city in a foreign country and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit your for several days.

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. Do you agree?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

You recently stayed at a hotel conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaint.

Some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them. Do you agree or disagree?