In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually empahsise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In
this
modern ,era
companies
try to present their
products
as innovative goods in their advertisements. Competition becomes harder every day and to persuade the customers they should do
this
matter. I think it will be a destructive way for our environment even though has special advantages. The world economy has a gradual trend and new and creative
companies
established. Various choices and goods are available in all sections and designers should add useful, innovative and useful details to their
products
to defeat their competitors.
For example
in IT technology, mobile
companies
like Appeal and Samsung try to release new devices or add interesting options to their
last
products
every year. People
also
are so busy and they always search for
products
to do what they want in the fastest and easiest way and
this
demand needs new
products
.
Also
in the new world people interface with problems that do not exist in the past and they search for
products
to overcome these new problems.
For instance
, people use their mobile phones more than in the past and mobiles with reliable batteries that could save energy for more hours will be at customer's attention. I believe
this
atmosphere is not good at all.
Firstly
factories spend numerous budgets and try to produce new goods
and
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which
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a lot of energy and it is harmful to the environment,
,
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nevertheless
they say we are green
companies
. They
also
try to sell some specific tools especially technological
products
in certain periods of time but in ,fact consumers do not need them.
Besides
negative points, positive effects could be seen. New inventions help with environmental problems, like computers, they help us to reduce our paper consumption or electric cars help us to have clean air. In conclusion, businesses should provide inviate
products
but it is so crucial to do not be essential for everything and lead to yearly buying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovation
  • cutting-edge
  • novelty
  • Consumer attention
  • brand image
  • market competition
  • premium pricing
  • sense of urgency
  • product re-engagement
  • technological advancements
  • changing preferences
  • sales strategy
  • crowded market
  • appeal
  • stand out
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