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Some people believe that children should be taught a second language at elementary school. What is your opinion?

#people #children #second #language #school
Many people believe that elementary
school
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schools
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 should give their students
lesson
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lessons
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 about
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second
language
. I agree
to
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this
 statement because we are not losing anything or
get
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getting
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 any
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 when we were studying
second
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the second
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language
,
instead
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 it has a lot of
benefit
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benefits
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.
First
, with practice
other
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another language
other languages
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language
 at school
it
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can
also
 indirectly improve our intelligence. By studying
other
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another language
other languages
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language
, our brain is trained to have a good memory.
This
have
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 a good impact
for
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 us
to
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remembering
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 things even though at the end of the day we
are not use
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are not using
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 the
language
 we learned.
Moreover
, if a
second
language
taught
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 at elementary school it means that the children studying since they were young, so they can absorb the lessons quicker than
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an adult
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adult
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adults
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 who already
fulfill
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fulfil
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 their
brain
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brains
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 with a bunch of memory.
Besides
 that, children should study a
second
language
 since now we have 2 international
language
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languages
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, it is
chinese
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Chinese
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 and
english
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English
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. At least we should speak one of these languages. If our mother tongue is
english
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then
 we should
practice
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chinese
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 and vice versa. Especially if
we're not speak
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we do not speak
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 these languages in the
first
 place, a
second
language
 is
very
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 important thing to compete in
this
 cruel world.
Myself
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for
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 instance, my mother tongue is Bahasa which is widely spoken by Indonesian people. Maybe there
is
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are
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 a
millions
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people
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of people
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 fluent in Bahasa but it is not
international
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an international
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language
, so
i
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I
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 should learn
speaking
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to speak
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the english
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english
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language
. So in the future, when it comes for me to
work
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working
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 under a company,
i
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I
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 have
strength
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strengths
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 compared to
other
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others
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 which
is
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are
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 fluent in
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the english
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english
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English
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language
. In conclusion, speaking a
second
language
 is a mandatory requirement
as
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 a human in
this
 era.
World
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 is moving
on
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at
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the
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a
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 fast pace and
the
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language
 must not be
the
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 barrier to
realize
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realising
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this
.
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