The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie charts illustrate different ways of sorting dangerous
waste
in Use synonyms
Sweden
, the Use synonyms
UK
and the Republic of Use synonyms
Korea
. The data is measured in Use synonyms
percentage
.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Overall
, the strategies implemented to sort the dangerous Linking Words
waste
vary in three countries. Use synonyms
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Korea
largely depend on underground burying, recycling, and incineration methods. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the range of solutions is more diverse in the Linking Words
UK
, but it extensively uses only one - the underground solution; the use of the rest is insignificant.
In terms of scale, burying hazardous Use synonyms
waste
constitute the biggest shares in the Use synonyms
UK
and Use synonyms
Sweden
, with 82% and 55% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the republic of Linking Words
Korea
opts to bury only 22% of its dangerous remains.
As regards recycling, Use synonyms
while
69% of the Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
waste
is reprocessed in Use synonyms
Korea
, in Use synonyms
Sweden
slightly over one-third of the total amount (25%) is sent to recycling facilities. The Use synonyms
UK
does not consider Use synonyms
this
solution at all.
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Sweden
and Use synonyms
Korea
choose incineration as the third means of dealing with Use synonyms
waste
. The former buries 20 % and the latter - 9% of their hazardous materials. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, in both countries incineration takes up the smallest share. The Linking Words
UK
burns a mere 2% of its toxic rubbish.
Use synonyms
Finally
, the remaining two techniques of sorting the dangerous Linking Words
waste
present chemical treatment and Use synonyms
disposing
at sea. These two account for 16 % (with 8% for each segment) in the Replace the word
disposal
UK
, Use synonyms
however
Linking Words
Korea
and Use synonyms
Sweden
do not use Use synonyms
at
all.Correct pronoun usage
them at
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