The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie charts illustrate different ways of sorting dangerous
waste
in
Sweden
, the
UK
and the Republic of
Korea
. The data is measured in
percentage
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
show examples
.
Overall
, the strategies implemented to sort the dangerous
waste
vary in three countries.
Sweden
and
Korea
largely depend on underground burying, recycling, and incineration methods.
By contrast
, the range of solutions is more diverse in the
UK
, but it extensively uses only one - the underground solution; the use of the rest is insignificant. In terms of scale, burying hazardous
waste
constitute the biggest shares in the
UK
and
Sweden
, with 82% and 55% respectively.
However
, the republic of
Korea
opts to bury only 22% of its dangerous remains. As regards recycling,
while
69% of the
overall
waste
is reprocessed in
Korea
, in
Sweden
slightly over one-third of the total amount (25%) is sent to recycling facilities. The
UK
does not consider
this
solution at all.
Sweden
and
Korea
choose incineration as the third means of dealing with
waste
. The former buries 20 % and the latter - 9% of their hazardous materials.
Nevertheless
, in both countries incineration takes up the smallest share. The
UK
burns a mere 2% of its toxic rubbish.
Finally
, the remaining two techniques of sorting the dangerous
waste
present chemical treatment and
disposing
Replace the word
disposal
show examples
at sea. These two account for 16 % (with 8% for each segment) in the
UK
,
however
Korea
and
Sweden
do not use
at
Correct pronoun usage
them at
show examples
all.
Submitted by natalia.bagdavadze on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, sweden, uk, korea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dangerous waste products
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Incineration
  • Chemical treatment
  • Landfill
  • Disposal methods
  • Hazardous
  • Environmental protection
  • Sustainability
  • Waste reduction
  • Toxic substances
  • E-waste
  • Sanitary engineering
  • Biodegradable
  • Non-biodegradable
  • Regulations
  • Compliance
  • Contamination
  • Conservation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: