Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I can agree with
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statement but only
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half
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. I believe that air
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for short distances in
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country could be afforded by people below
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class.
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by plane or another air transport variant was always hard for me. I couldn’t forget
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that I used to have as a child
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me and my family were flying to another country. I imagine that you can take
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of all benefits only using business class.
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traveling
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industry is growing very fast and I think in the near future almost everyone could afford to travel using
this
way. It is faster and more convenient than all the others but it still has lots of disadvantages. I don’t really like going somewhere using
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plane
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but sometimes I just don’t have other options to move.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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