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Some people think that a new language should be invented for people from different countries to use for international communication. Do the advantages outweigh its drawbacks?

#people #language #countries #communication
Nowadays, international
communication
 among different countries is one of the most significant problems. It is argued
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whether a new
language
 should be created or not.
Although
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equality for
communication
 all around the world, ı strongly believe that it is very unnecessary because every single person needs to learn
different
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language
. On one hand, people think if
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 which
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 is produced for
communication
, everyone can understand and learn
this
 in
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 way. Occasionally, some things can cause misunderstands among countries during
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international conversations since some structures in various languages are not able to be translated
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 exact meanings.
This
 can lead to unwanted consequences.
For example
, Turkey and Russia were about to enter a war in 2002 as
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 of certain words.
Therefore
, having a new agreed
language
 may avoid these problems.
On the other hand
, inventing a new
language
 is not a beneficial method to deal with
this
 problem as every single person needs to learn
this
language
 from the beginning.
First
, teachers should be educated for educating
language
 to people. While training the teachers,
same
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 problems may occur between
new
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language
 and
other
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language
.
For instance
, In 2006, NATO tried to invent a new
language
,
however
, they gave up at the end of the period because there is
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language
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languages
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 in the world and creating
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language
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common
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 conversation is challenging. In conclusion, whether a new
language
 should be composed or not is debated to have better international
communication
. In my point of view,
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 outweigh to advantages.
Therefore
, I completely agree
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that society needs to enhance the connection between
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languages
instead
 of creating a
language
.
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