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Some people think that a new language should be invented for people from different countries to use for international communication. Do the advantages outweigh its drawbacks?

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Nowadays, international
communication
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 among different countries is one of the most significant problems. It is argued
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whether a new
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Although
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 it originates
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equality for
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 all around the world, ı strongly believe that it is very unnecessary because every single person needs to learn
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language
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. On one hand, people think if
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 which
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 is produced for
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, everyone can understand and learn
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 way. Occasionally, some things can cause misunderstands among countries during
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international conversations since some structures in various languages are not able to be translated
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 exact meanings.
This
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, Turkey and Russia were about to enter a war in 2002 as
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translation
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 of certain words.
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, having a new agreed
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 may avoid these problems.
On the other hand
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, inventing a new
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 is not a beneficial method to deal with
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 problem as every single person needs to learn
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language
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 from the beginning.
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, teachers should be educated for educating
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 to people. While training the teachers,
same
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 problems may occur between
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language
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 and
other
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another language
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language
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, In 2006, NATO tried to invent a new
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however
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, they gave up at the end of the period because there is
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 in the world and creating
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a new
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language
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to
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common
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 conversation is challenging. In conclusion, whether a new
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 should be composed or not is debated to have better international
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. In my point of view,
disadvantages
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 outweigh to advantages.
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, I completely agree
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that society needs to enhance the connection between
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languages
instead
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 of creating a
language
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