The treat of nuclear weapons manteins world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technologie far outweigh the disavantages. To what to extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is important to say that Nuclear power was a

technology

invented for humans , just like the greatest destroyer ever invent. Personally , I believe that nuclear power has more disadvantages than advantages because it exposes humans to

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when humans want.I feel

this

way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin

with, Nuclear weapons have caused disasters

such

as in Chornobyl and Fukushima , destroying wildlife, families and all life that was surrounded. ,

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this

disaster has contributed that anyone can live in these places generating toxic waste and a catastrophic environment.

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, The accident in Chenorbil

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caused an explosion of a reactor and the impact was contamination with radioactive particles until 30km around , in

this

place never can live until 20.000 years. It is clear that when there is an accident with Nuclear

technology

has an impact on society because it produces diseases

such

as cancer, and child born malformations in their bodies , the land is toxic, so people can't plant anything. Another thing is Nuclear

technology

is very expensive ,

moreover

, government don't care the waste produced by Nuclear

technology

does not disappear for a long time.

For instance

, in Japan , they have a huge bag of plastic that contain waste from the disaster in a nuclear plant in Fukushima but Japan government will drop poulet water into our ocean. In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments should find a solution so as not to have to on

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Nuclear

technology

and plant Nuclear and start to use renewable energy like solar energy, hydroelectric and wind, so to obtain a better world.

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mutually assured destruction (MAD)
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