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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them, other people believe it’s good to have friend who disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays , with improvements in technology , it is not very difficult that
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 have made many
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 from different countries with different cultures.
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 some
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 like to stay in their comfort zone I would like to have
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 with different cultures and visions.
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 with , I think it should help
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 to have folks with different opinions because they would learn new things from them .
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 , if they have a friend who does not agree with them on a subject they may have to discuss it with each other and in a free discussion they may get more knowledge and views that they have never thought about that
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 if they think their friend's opinion is not exactly true , they have to make strong reasons for their view and it would not happen unless they have enough information .
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 , they would become a more knowledgeable person if they made
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 with different views.
On the other hand
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 ,
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 are likely to talk with
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 who speak the same language because they get along together
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 when they are disappointed they need to have a good listener
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 of judging them and telling them their fault . In my opinion , we are living in 21 century and it is not the time we would like to have
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 who just appreciate us . We would not improve ourselves if we did not know our faults
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 I have made many
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 who do not agree with me . I have learnt many useful things while I was trying to convince my
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 of my opinion . In conclusion , having
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 with other opinions not only helps you to become a more knowledgeable person but
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 faces you with your faults.
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