The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays with the fast-paced improvements in technology, especially in the communication industry , the use of the internet has increasingly grown,

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more people use the internet for their daily routines like shopping, ordering food, booking a hotel, reserving a flight and even taking a taxi online, and for all

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reasons there are arguments that

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might lead to the closing of all shops in the near future.

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online services might look like a threat to the traditional way of shopping, but

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would not lead to their closure entirely, because mankind is a sociable being and it needs to socialize with others and one way of doing it, is to go out and do the shopping and interact with others.

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there are some historical and cultural values in cities with an old Bazar, there are

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there that show the culture and tradition of people who live there and

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are a great tourist attraction and have an economic value so there would be no effect on them. In conclusion , I agree that some types of

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might get closed with the increasing online shopping websites and mobile phone applications but it would not affect all types of

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, clothing

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would still remain because people need to try out the clothes to see if it fits,

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in the tourist sections of the city will remain open but the vast majority of

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that provide daily needs like groceries, laundry or taxi service would be closed and an online application would take their place

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