Government should spend miney money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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plays a major role in

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daily

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.

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use

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,

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,sea and sky as transport modes to move from one place to another. Undoubtedly, the most number of

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use

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and

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to reach their

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destination

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and

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are maintain

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by the government of a country.From my point of

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I completely disagree with the statement and I will examine the views stated above. Nowadays, every individual

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to complete their tasks as soon as they can.

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,

people

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trying to use their own

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or public

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such

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as

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buses, cars, vans and etc. If

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are in good condition

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can reach their

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easily and they will be able to save

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time.

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people

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can complete their daily tasks on time.

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,

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appear

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development of a country.Not only the positive aspects but

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the negativities

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can be seen.If the

roads

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are not well maintained,

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have to face

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accident

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and they will

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in

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traffic jams.

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, the government should spend more money on

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as it is the popular and common mode of

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.

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who travel by

train

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have to follow a schedule and if they miss the timetable

people

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have to wait for the other

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railways

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the materials needed to be repaired are too expensive.

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hand

people

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cannot reach the exact

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and

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the trains can be delayed.

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, If a person suddenly

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to change

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they cannot do it.They have to get down from the place where the

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stop. Along with

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there are

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positive points as well.

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,a vast range of passengers can be carried in a

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and the

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is the most budgeted mode of

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for long

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. Generally, the money which we spend on

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can build two

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. In conclusion, my opinion is governments should spend money on

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rather than

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.