Government should spend miney money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Transportation
plays a major role in
humans
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daily
routine
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routines
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.
People
use
roads
,
railways
,sea and sky as transport modes to move from one place to another. Undoubtedly, the most number of
people
use
railways
and
roads
to reach their
destination
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destinations
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.
Roads
and
railways
are maintain
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by the government of a country.From my point of
view
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I completely disagree with the statement and I will examine the views stated above. Nowadays, every individual
try
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to complete their tasks as soon as they can.
Therefore
,
people
trying to use their own
vehicle
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vehicles
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or public
transportation
such
as
,
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buses, cars, vans and etc. If
roads
are in good condition
people
can reach their
destination
easily and they will be able to save
the
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time.
For example
,if the ways are
well maintained
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well-maintained
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people
can complete their daily tasks on time.
Also
,
roads
appear
the
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development of a country.Not only the positive aspects but
also
the negativities
also
can be seen.If the
roads
are not well maintained,
people
have to face
for
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accident
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and they will
stuck
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in
the
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traffic jams.
Finally
, the government should spend more money on
roads
as it is the popular and common mode of
transportation
.
People
who travel by
train
have to follow a schedule and if they miss the timetable
people
have to wait for the other
train
.
In addition
, on
railways
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the materials needed to be repaired are too expensive.
In
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one
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hand
people
cannot reach the exact
destination
and
on the other
hand
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the trains can be delayed.
For instance
, If a person suddenly
decide
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decides
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to change
the
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their
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destination
they cannot do it.They have to get down from the place where the
train
stop. Along with
negativities
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there are
few
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positive points as well.
Moreover
,a vast range of passengers can be carried in a
train
and the
train
is the most budgeted mode of
transportation
for long
distance
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distances
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. Generally, the money which we spend on
railways
can build two
roads
. In conclusion, my opinion is governments should spend money on
roads
rather than
railways
.
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