Government should spend miney money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Transportation
plays a major role in humans
daily Change noun form
humans'
human's
routine
.Fix the agreement mistake
routines
People
use roads
,railways
,sea and sky as transport modes to move from one place to another. Undoubtedly, the most number of people
use railways
and roads
to reach their destination
.Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
Roads
and railways
are maintain
by the government of a country.From my point of Change the verb form
are maintained
view
I completely disagree with the statement and I will examine the views stated above.
Nowadays, every individual Add a comma
,view
try
to complete their tasks as soon as they can.Change the verb form
tries
Therefore
,people
trying to use their own vehicle
or public Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
transportation
such
as ,
buses, cars, vans and etc. If Remove the comma
apply
roads
are in good condition people
can reach their destination
easily and they will be able to save the
time.Correct article usage
apply
For example
,if the ways are well maintained
Add a hyphen
well-maintained
people
can complete their daily tasks on time. Also
, roads
appear the
development of a country.Not only the positive aspects but Change preposition
to the
also
the negativities also
can be seen.If the roads
are not well maintained, people
have to face for
Change preposition
apply
accident
and they will Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
stuck
in Change the verb form
be stuck
stick
the
traffic jams.Correct article usage
apply
Finally
, the government should spend more money on roads
as it is the popular and common mode of transportation
.
People
who travel by train
have to follow a schedule and if they miss the timetable people
have to wait for the other train
. In addition
, on railways
the materials needed to be repaired are too expensive. Add a comma
,railways
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand Correct article usage
the one
people
cannot reach the exact destination
and on the other
hand
the trains can be delayed. Add a comma
,hand
For instance
, If a person suddenly decide
to change Change the verb form
decides
the
Change the word
their
destination
they cannot do it.They have to get down from the place where the train
stop. Along with negativities
there are Add a comma
,negativities
few
positive points as well.Correct article usage
a few
Moreover
,a vast range of passengers can be carried in a train
and the train
is the most budgeted mode of transportation
for long distance
.
Generally, the money which we spend on Fix the agreement mistake
distances
railways
can build two roads
. In conclusion, my opinion is governments should spend money on roads
rather than railways
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