Your friend invited you to his\her party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1- explain why you cannot come 2- give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner. 3- suggest another time to meet.

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Dear Naman, I am doing good, hope you are doing well! I was so excited about your graduation party in Chicago

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week but I would like to let you know that I will not be able

attend

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to attend

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. Unfortunately, I cannot come

for

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your party because I have to go to Germany

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Monday for attending a plastics trade show representing my company. The K-show is

finally

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happening after three years break due to

pandemic

Correct article usage

the pandemic

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hence

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it is not only an important opportunity for my career but

also

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a strategic visit to stay updated with the

busniness

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business

market. I hate to inform you

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of my

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change of plans on

such

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Correct article usage

apply

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short notice but I wish my company would

have

Wrong verb form

had

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informed me earlier about

this

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possibility. It turns out that my program Director contacted me just yesterday about

this

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so I am letting you know as early as possible. I am sure I am going to miss out on a great time at your party and the opportunity to meet you and your family. Let's meet once I am back from the trip

mid November

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mid-November

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. It would be great if we can spend the Thanksgiving holidays together in Chicago with your family. I have

also

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asked Vimal to join us to make it

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apply

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perfect friends

get together

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get-together

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. See you soon my friend. Have fun! Darshit

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

225 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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IELTS 8 - Exam 2 - Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?