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Band 6.5

You have a problem with a neigbour. Write a letter to your neigbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbour to explain take

#neigbour #action #neighbour
Dear
Madom
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Madam
 I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about keeping your garbage bags near our gate.
Firstly
, it is illegal to throw garbage in front of someone's house.
As a result
, there
us
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is
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 a bad smell in the
entere
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entire
 area because of that.
In addition
, It is
damage
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to
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people's body as well as
this
 could lead to germs everywhere.
This
 incident has been going on for 5 months. In my opinion, it has been happening that may be due to the unorganized visits of the cleaning service.
However
, I have been patient
till
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 date. I do not usually complain, but, as a loyal neighbour. I hope you will be interested in my comments.
It you
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You
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 could arrange a place behind your home or even outside your garage, which has a lid on it so.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, you could
scheduled
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 visit days
of
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for
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 the cleaning truck. I kindly request you
to
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take immediate action on
this
 matter.
Your
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Yours
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 faithfully Ruby Fallon
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