SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM IS THE ONLY CRITICIAL FACTOR TO DEVELOPMENT OF A COUNTRY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

The time of 21st century has witnessed
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education
development and technology. So, nowadays there are a number of different sectors available to develop a
nation
as compared to institutions. I disagree with the given statement and I will explain my point of view in
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further
paragraphs. The
first
and foremost crucial reason, which support my opinion is there is no need
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to update the
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because the technology is updated as compared to
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100 years and from the use of the different kind of devices, tools, and
softwares
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software
, people can easily develop the country. To illustrate
this
, nowadays through the use of advertisements, billboards and other platforms the government understand the
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point of view as well as it
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to reduce crime rates through the support of media.
Secondly
, uneducated people serve in a better way as compared to
educated
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person
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the
nation
.
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, in India, prime minister Narendra Modi without any kind of academic knowledge,
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solved a number of problems, which is related to India.
On the other hand
,
education
is the most powerful thing as well as it is important for those who want to serve the country in a significant way.
Moreover
, some civil workers
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the
nation
in sufficient directions, because these civil
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tended to develop the
nation
.
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,
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Indian prime minister Manmohan Singh is
educated
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person and he
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phenomenon knowledge about
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, which
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improved India very well as compared to other prime ministers. Agglomerating all points above elaborated, I opine that
education
is not important to develop a country, but excellence knowledge and work is more required than
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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