Nowadays, due to the improvement of technology, more and more useful and creative electronic devices were invented,
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the invention of television.
, some
claimed that because of
invention, there are some drawbacks
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our cultural
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. In my opinion, I believe that
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has more positive
than negative ones.
It is often argued that watching
is an activity that causes
to get
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. The reason is that
leisure activity can really let
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world not only
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adults. Whereas,
situation will increase the antisocial and isolated problems. The whole society may be influenced by
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watching programs or playing switch on
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.
, the program
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sometimes will
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or
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for children. If parents don't pay attention,
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which they saw on
.
Despite these negative effects, there are still many
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from
creation.
, they can gain worldwide and various
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by watching
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, we can easily achieve new things in
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interesting way
of reading in the library boringly.
, it can help
to release their stress. Because of the heavy work and economic stress, more and more workers feel unhappy and
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. But after work, they can share
with their family by watching some movies or cartoons together. Overall, television is really convenient and is a good product for
to use during their leisure
.
In conclusion, the invention of
is a
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sword.
, I think there are more benefits and positive effects than
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negative sides as long as we should not watch it all the
.