Some people argue that governments should make laws regarding people’s nutrition and food choices to improve public health while others contend that this is the freedom of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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people

believe that

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choices

and their citizen's

nutrition

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that needs to rule by the government. Whereas other

people

tend to argue

this

should be a freedom of private choice and responsibility.

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explanation regarding the issue will

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in the essay.

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hand,

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laws

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what

people

should eat may become interesting.

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,

one

of the

advantage

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is it will be a good solution to avoid malnutrition problems in a country

,

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because if they disobey the rule they will

be punish

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.

Therefore

, everyone will encourage

theirselves

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to maintain their

nutrition

.

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,

meals

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laws

can

blurred

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the wealth level in society.

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is because

food

choices

is

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likely the same both for the poor and the rich. And it is the responsibility

for

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the government to

provides

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suitable needs, especially for the poor.

For example

, groceries which sell in the market may have the same variety in each store in terms of

nutrition

laws

.

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,

citizen

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tend to eat similar menus either in a big or small house.

On the other hand

, rules about someone's

food

preparation may not suitable for every person.

Nutrition

is something that cannot be the same for everyone.

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choices

and

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for

one

person

unlikely

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the same for others by the reason of different body

type

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. Another bad side

if

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meals

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become

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a

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law is the lack of variety of

food

and beverage businesses. It is a result

from

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strict

food

materials according to the

laws

. To illustrate, there will be no

existance

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existence

of fast

food

business because

this

consider

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as

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unhealthy. And the bad impacts of

this

can affect the economic growth of a country. In conclusion,

people

's

nutrition

and

food

choices

laws

may seem

as

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an interesting solution to improve public health.

In contrast

, it is

also

can

creates

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negative effects

for

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people

within the country.