Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

in recent year, using social
media
to share lifestyle seem like a modern trend.
people
especially the young generation use social
media
a lot. but many
people
believe that
this
is harmful and prevents us to have relationships in real life.
nevertheless
, some
people
get benefit from social
media
. as a human,society we cannot lives without making a connection with the world around us,
therefore
teenagers
often spend their time on social
media
. but in recent times social
media
become worsened ,
for instance
, bullying, some
teenagers
have sent hate comments to other users of social
media
, and the case often happens and
consequently
of
this
is victim lead depression. the other things are fake news, hoax which is harmful to
people
who believe that thing is really happening
then
sending donation which that money can help
people
who needed
moreover
social
media
can make
people
with the same interests
to
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connect and they can share anything ,
for example
, news, the story
also
recipes from
people
in different countries.
besides
we can get much information from social
media
which helps
teenagers
to think broader away and more.
nevertheless
,
teenagers
have a lot of inspiration to apply in real life. social
media
can lighten the stress after work hours. in summary,
people
who use social
media
need aware of any kind of scam and prevent themself from bullying. use wisely information that we get and share it with other
people
in real life. in my view, social
media
bring more benefit to us.
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