Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.
in recent year, using social
media
to share lifestyle seem like a modern trend. people
especially the young generation use social media
a lot. but many people
believe that this
is harmful and prevents us to have relationships in real life. nevertheless
, some people
get benefit from social media
.
as a human,society we cannot lives without making a connection with the world around us, therefore
teenagers
often spend their time on social media
. but in recent times social media
become worsened ,for instance
, bullying, some teenagers
have sent hate comments to other users of social media
, and the case often happens and consequently
of this
is victim lead depression. the other things are fake news, hoax which is harmful to people
who believe that thing is really happening then
sending donation which that money can help people
who needed
moreover
social media
can make people
with the same interests to
connect and they can share anything ,Fix the infinitive
apply
for example
, news, the story also
recipes from people
in different countries. besides
we can get much information from social media
which helps teenagers
to think broader away and more. nevertheless
, teenagers
have a lot of inspiration to apply in real life. social media
can lighten the stress after work hours.
in summary, people
who use social media
need aware of any kind of scam and prevent themself from bullying. use wisely information that we get and share it with other people
in real life. in my view, social media
bring more benefit to us.Submitted by nilawatifuad on
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