Many students now work whilst they are studying in college or university. This often results in them having les time to concentrate on their as well as feelingunder pressure. what are some of the causes of this ? what solutions could you suggest?

Over the

last

few years,

students

have been working and studying at the same time,

this

pattern has put a lot of them in a delicate situation

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since they have to earn money as well as succeed in their studies,

this

essay will discuss the reasons why

this

is happening and put forward several solutions. There are various reasons why both undergraduates and postgraduates

work

while studying,

first

of all, the expensive fees,

students

have to pay a big amount of money in order to study a major and to enrol in classes in any university.

Moreover

, they have to pay for their accommodations and other facilities,

secondly

, most of them come from middle-class families and it's not possible for them to afford these costly courses, a survey done in several universities in England had shown that most

students

merely receive any financial help from their families.

As a result

, many of them have to

work

to be able to pay off their classes and other related fees. An obvious solution is to decrease the highly required fees, the government in collaboration with universities' administrations have to

work

towards a solution to lessen these costs,

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government initiates a program to fund

students

' accommodations,

therefore

they will no longer have to pay rent, there is,

in addition

, one

further

solution to suggest, increasing the number of scholarships and grants offered by colleges, not only it will raise the number of potential candidates wanting to enrol there but,

also

applicants will have to study more and more to obtain these opportunities. By reducing these charges

students

will be able to concentrate more on their opted majors and worry less about expenses. To conclude, a likely reason why

students

work

while studying is to pay off the expensive bills, a collaboration between governments and universities will put forward several solutions to

this

problem.