Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work.do you think it is positive or negative development?

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modern era, science and technology
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evolved rapidly. A substantial amount of
people
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routinely use machines at
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and organizational
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.
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technology helped a lot
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being
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, it has badly influenced society.
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of machines as
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development.
People
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are losing interest to pursue their chores by themselves. Since
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every individual
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to do any work by others;
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consequently
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they engage
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third
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party or any materialistic assistance to accomplish their expected job.
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, depending on washing machines, vacuum
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cleaners
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and microwave
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etc.
people
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are getting familiar
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inclined to
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lifestyle; recent
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inventions
instead
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of laborious work in their daily chores.
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life style
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lifestyle
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is causing various health issues for individuals. If
people
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live a
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life, they will suffer from certain diseases at
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early age.
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, excessive use of mobile phones and gadgets in daily
lives
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life
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is
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reason
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anxiety, blood pressure and insomnia.
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,
usage
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the usage
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of machinery
at
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in
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every field not only changes the
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lifestyle
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of
people
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but
also
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influences on personality and
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of the generation. To exemplify, playing computer games
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routine
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a routine
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of
late night
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sleep pattern and lack of patience in society. So, communities are getting addicted
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electronic appliances and exacerbating their living style. In conclusion, weighing the above factors,
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machinery has
play
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a vital role in
development
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the development
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of society at
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a domestic
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and commercial
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,
negatives
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the negatives
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of excessive usage of robots are likely to be high with the passage of time.

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