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Students today can easily get access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

#students #access #information #libraries
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As technology has improved through the years, the
internet
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 is an important part of many
people
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’s lives today.
As a result
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, there is great access to
information
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that is
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 based on the
internet
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, and
students
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 can find out about them online.
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 I believe that finding
information
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 online makes it easier for
students
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, I don’t think it can replace
libraries
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. It would be hard for me to believe if someone said that there will come a day when there is no use for
libraries
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 and that the
internet
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 took over
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 completely. Because
first
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 of all,
libraries
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 are not just about reading through
books
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 or borrowing them to find
information
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 about a specific subject; it is
also
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 a place where
people
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 go in order to get detached from the outside world and focus on a book they want to read severely. I would call that a comfort zone for many
people
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.
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, many
students
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 go to
libraries
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 as a place where they can concentrate on what they are studying.
For instance
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, when I was studying at university, I found a high majority of my classmates in the library because they wanted to study well for exams.
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 something that can not be replaced by the
internet
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.
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, the
internet
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 provides
people
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 with a lot of
information
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, but it sometimes contains false
information
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 which can not be trustable. In order to choose the correct resources,
students
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 must search for scholars’
books
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 and ideas online, which may not be a complete version of the book but only a summary. And
also
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, scientific
books
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 and
information
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 that are needed
for
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students
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 have high prices most of the time and they have to pay to get access to them. While reading
books
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 and finding them in
libraries
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 are usually free or may cost a very low entry fee. In conclusion, the online
information
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 on the
internet
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 and the
books
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 collected in
libraries
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 are two separate things that can not be replaced by each other.
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 the fast pace of reaching data online makes
students
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’ jobs easier, it can not be an alternative to the comforting environment and the feelings of touching, smelling, and reading paper
books
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 bring to
people
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, especially
students
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. And, the costs of reading
books
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 or borrowing them from
libraries
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 are more reasonable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible information
  • online databases
  • e-books
  • educational websites
  • community centers
  • physical books
  • literacy programs
  • peer-reviewed resources
  • misleading information
  • digital divide
  • high-speed internet
  • underprivileged communities
  • custodians of culture
  • archival material
  • conducive environment
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