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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 modern ,era
smartphones
 become time-consuming devices for
children
. It is a harmful trend which rises remarkably and causes serious problems for
children
. I believe
this
 is a bad situation for the
children
.
Firstly
 spending hours on these electronic devices will lead to health issues, for ,example a substantial percentage of
children
 in various age groups are faced with obesity because they do not have any physical activities and they just play with their
smartphones
instead
 of playing traditional games with their peers. They
also
 will misunderstand social skills as they do not learn how to
interaction
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 with other
children
 in the real world. It is
also
 a threat to the learning process, especially in primary school
children
 because they are at the state of the learning road and they should try hard and concentrate on their practices but
smartphones
 do not permit them to concentrate. Using
smartphones
 with inappropriate gestures
also
 makes problems in adolescence period and as a consequence their neck forms badly.
Besides
 all the harms for the
children
,
this
 cutting-edge technology has outstanding benefits for the young generation, parents could have access to their
children
's location all the time and absolutely they can learn a lot about numerous topics on the internet and even though some digital games could improve their creativity and innovation. In conclusion, parents should have a limitation on their
children
's usage and be careful about threats on the internet for the
children
 and teaches them to how to protect themself against them. In the ,end it is crucial to speak with the
children
 and not struggle with them for less consumption and if they do not convince, speaking with a concealer could be a suitable option.
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